China in My Eyes
Four years is not a long time,nor a short
time for me to open my eyes and visualize what this dragon country looks
like.It is two years since I came to China with a curiosity in my mind
and desire in my soul to acknowledge whatever I could about this native
country of mine.With a month more to go,it seems to me that every second
during the stay at this Southern China is like the sands of time
running out and revealing secret by secret of its people,its culture,its
language and its tradition.
The first time I arrived at GuangZhou
East Station directly from HK,I was struck by the restlessness and
disorder of the people rushing in and out,carrying packs of luggage and
scrambling for a taxi.Yet having observed about me,I felt an undefinable
safety.everyone around me was just like myself,an ordinary Chinese;
fear,doubt,and worry for my being a stranger here all at once
vanished.Yes,I felt safe and secure with my surroundings; no more
curious eyes staring at me like I was some kind of alien from other
planet; no more abusive languages or mockery that used to be aimed at me
whenever I was strolling along the streets.on this very earth of
China,I found the safety which I could never find in other places.
When
I come to the topic of Chinese people,I don't think there is
requirement for me any more to mention to you in details what Chinese
people really look like,for I am also a Chinese.I have known many
Chinese here and made some of them my best friends.Once I was invited to
stay at a friend's house in her hometown,I was amazed by the
friendliness of every relative and friend of hers.I was treated as if I
were one of their families.Despite their simplicity,they take care of
their guests in every detail.This arouses my admiration toward the
hospitality of Chinese people and I can't stop comparing this with the
reserved and cold neighbourhood in my hometown.When I left ,I found I
missed the friendliness and warmth of those people.
"What?You plan to
study in China?Are you kidding?Isn't China an underdeveloped country?"
These sentences appeared on the screen of the computer when I chatted
via internet with my friends.I was enraged with their blindness.What
right do they have in saying so,since they have not seen the fact
themselves?Fact reveals to you everything.My only reply to them was that
I was blessed for having come to China and that I don't regret at all
for my decision.In my eyes,China is a very big developing country;
technically designed buildings and suspension bridges are constructed in
every corner of the streets; skyscrapers seem to split up the
sky,symbolizing the trading centre of the city; vehicle of all
sorts,including bicycles of all types,are seen dispersed over the
traffic; people wearing sophisticated clothes are holding the mobile
phones strolling to their offices.Anyway,all this is evidence that shows
apparently to us one thing only.Those moving creatures are now moving
to one target,that is modernization and development,which is now
coloring this big country!
比如：我最喜欢的食物是蔬菜沙拉（或者任何清淡的食物），就可以这样写 ——
Speaking of favorite food, many people would consider abundant fish and meat. For me, however, just a simple salad (或其他清淡食物) would make my perfect daily diet.?
下面就是喜欢的原因。。。
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如果喜欢吃不太健康的一些食物，比如牛肉芝士汉堡，就可以这样写 ——
Many people would take hamburgers as unhealthy food as they are rich in fat. I agree with them but I still have to admit that my favorite food is no more than a beef cheese burger (或其他食物).
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总之，开头的套路就是：先写上一些有大家公认的东西，比如汉堡不健康啊之类的；然后再通过转折引到自己的主题上
There are four seasons in a year: spring、summer、autumn and winter. I love them very much but the most favorite season is spring.
People said“The whole year’s work depends on a good start in spring.”Spring is a very wonderful season. It’s the morning of the day. It's warmer than winter, cooler than summer and more energetic than autumn. In spring, leaves turn green and flowers turn beautiful. They come out of the ground. The birds sing very well. In spring, we can play outside all day. The air is fresh and it makes us comfortable. Spring always rains, too. Maybe some people don’t like rain because it makes us unhappy. I like the rain very much. Although it makes the ground wet but rice、vegetables and so on all need rain. I love it very much. I love spring because it gets warmer. Animals run out of their holes, it makes me pleasant. Spring is the time for planting. The ground becomes softer and warmer from the rain and the sun.
It was my birthday yesterday. I got a lot of gifts. All of them were covered with coloured paper. Among them there were two interesting ones. My elder sister gave me a round paper bag and I thought i
It was my birthday yesterday. I got a lot of gifts. All of them were covered with coloured paper. Among them there were two interesting ones. My elder sister gave me a round paper bag and I thought it was a football. BUt when I opened it, it turned out to be a clock. My brother gave me a message, saying that My present has been put in your bedroom. As soon as I went into my bedroom, I found a box. I opened it and found a laptop. I was very happy. These two presents aim to let me study hard and not to waste time. 昨天是我的生日,我收到了很多礼物.它们用彩纸包着,其中有两件有趣的东西. 我姐姐送了我一个圆纸包,开始我认为是个足球,但打开后才发现是一个闹钟.我哥给我留了张条,告诉我：“我的礼物已经放在你的卧室里了.”我走进卧室,发现一个盒子.我打开了它,里面是一台笔记本电脑.我非常高兴. 这两件礼物是为了让我好好学习,抓紧时间. Yesterday was my birthday and I received a lot of presents. These presents were packed in coloured paper and two of them were funny and interesting, which impressed me. My sister sent a bag of present to me. The bag was big and round. I though it was a football. But when I opened it, I saw a clock. The other one was given by my brother. He left me a message, which said my present is lying in your bedroom. When I got to my bedroom, I found a laptop. Oh!Great! I jumped with joy. I know, they Want me to study hard and not to waste time. I would never forget this birthday. 昨天是我的生日,我收到了许多生日礼物,并且这些礼物都用彩纸包着.其中两件礼物很好玩很有趣,给我留下了很深的印象. 我姐姐送给我一个包,这包又大又圆.我认为是足球,可打开一看是个闹钟.另外一件礼物是我哥哥送给我的,他给我留了一张纸条,上面写着：“我的礼物放在你的卧室里.”当我进入卧室时,我看到了一台笔记本电脑.噢!真是太棒了!我高兴地跳了起来-.我明白他们想让我努力学习,不要浪费时间. 我将永远 不会忘记昨天.
写作思路：为自己的服装店写一则广告。要写出自己服装店的特点。
正文：
Come and buy your clothes at Mary's Clothes Store.
来玛丽服装店买你的衣服。
We have many good things at very good prices.
我们有许多物美价廉的好东西。
Do you like sweaters？We have green sweaters for only fifteen dollars！
你喜欢毛衣吗？我们有只卖15美元的绿色毛衣！
Yellow sweaters are only twelve dollars! Do you need trousers?
**毛衣只要12美元！你需要裤子吗？
For boys,we have black trousers for only twenty-two dollars.
对于男孩，我们有只卖二十二美元的黑裤子。
And shorts are only sixteen dollars!For girls,we have skirts in purple for only twenty dollars.
短裤才16美元！女孩们，我们有紫色的裙子，只要20美元。
How much are our jackets? Only thirty dollars!
我们的夹克多少钱？只有三十美元！
And we have black shoes for only twenty-eight dollars.
我们有只卖二十八美元的黑鞋子
Socks are only two dollars for three pairs!Opportunity not to lose!
三双袜子只要两美元！机会不容错过！